I have the dynamics of this thing worked out nearly in full. It involves a prince named Nova, a poisoned king, a secret son, a hidden infatuation, a matriarchal temple dedicated to a huntress, and a black unicorn. All that's left is to deal with the voice that's trying to tell the tale. It's distant and haunting, and not really like anything I've written before. So, here you have it - the first lines of Emissary.
It's said that the children of Rhin are born with bells braided in their hair. This way they cannot approach their elders unknown or learn the secrets the young need not hear. It's only when they've learnt to still their frantic fits and gentle their steps that the bells go silent and they prove themselves worthy of a place in society. And on that day, they earn the fear of the seven kingdoms, for everyone knows that the silent lands of Rhin are where assassins are bred.
This was the belief that bought the queen's emissary an uninterrupted voyage.
7 Chiming In:
Ok, THAT sounds really cool. I want to read it like... now.
Oo, chills and goosebumps!
Oh wow, that's so awesome! That is EXACTLY the type of beginning that would make me head instantly for the purchase counter. :) I really like it. :)
Completely BADASS! I love it; I love the idea of it. I have a thing for assassins. Just by those two paragraphs you created so much anticipation!
Awesome. I love the concept; and there is so much story and character building to look forward to here.
Good luck with the writing. It sounds great.
.......dhole
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